What's wrong with my argumentative essay.
When I see on my essay, something sems to be wrong.Well, I'm not speaking about the works-cited list or the font. The connection between ideas seem to more or lesss clear. There were quotations, paraphrases. I wrote down even the concluding sentences. The problem was in thesis statement. I don't understand the problem I'm discussing. From the one hand, the problem of gender discrimination seems to be obvious, from the other hand I have never faced this as women do. Maybe, where I don't see a problem, it exists, or I overestimate some stuffs. Also, I have not an appropriative worldwide attitude: Of course, my society is more "west" than russian, however, the country I live influence my point of view. So, I think I have no rights tj write, how it is hard to be a woman and what problem the face.
When I see on my essay, something sems to be wrong.Well, I'm not speaking about the works-cited list or the font. The connection between ideas seem to more or lesss clear. There were quotations, paraphrases. I wrote down even the concluding sentences. The problem was in thesis statement. I don't understand the problem I'm discussing. From the one hand, the problem of gender discrimination seems to be obvious, from the other hand I have never faced this as women do. Maybe, where I don't see a problem, it exists, or I overestimate some stuffs. Also, I have not an appropriative worldwide attitude: Of course, my society is more "west" than russian, however, the country I live influence my point of view. So, I think I have no rights tj write, how it is hard to be a woman and what problem the face.
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